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You’ll find positive, Motivational thoughts... In poetry few are written by Me n others too & Some r Translated also. I feel that thoughts heighten the awareness of our feelings & world around us.

यु तो तुम ...


15 comments:

helllo said...

bahut khub yara kuch yaad dila diya teri is kavita ne

~ said...

kya khub likhti ho tum yaar.....
essi tarh jaari raho ......bahut aage jaogi.....
GOD bless uuuu
lvss....tcc

Preeti said...

areeee dostji yeh hamne nahi likha ,,, Jyotsna ji ne likha hai, hamne to sirf usmain jaan daali apni design se ...

~ said...

so what.........design se jaan to tumne dali na ....or jaanti ho na ki beena jaan ke kisi bhi cheez ki koi value nhi......

रश्मि प्रभा said...

tumhari paarkhi nazar ki taarif karun yaa jyotsna ki rachna ki.....dono bemisaal hai,main to dono ki khubiyon se mantramugdh hun......

Jyotsna Pandey said...

प्रीति
बहुत अच्छा लगा
अपनी रचना को इस तरह सजा-संवारा देख

मेरी शुभ कामनाएं तुम्हारे लिए

Shashank Pandey's Blog said...

Thanks A lot ma'am for making my mom's creation so beautiful and 'alive'
Thaks!
Shank!

Preeti Mehta said...

सबसे पहले तो, ज्योत्सना जी आपको सलाम, इतनी बेहतरीन रचना के लिए...
और शशांक हमने सिर्फ आपकी माँ की रचना को अच्छे से पेश किया, बस.. उसमें एक रूह तो पहले से ही थी न ?
आंतरिक सुन्दरता न हो तो बाहरी दिखावे का कोई मतलब नहीं होता है .. दोनों एक दुसरे के पूरक है ... है न ?

वेद प्रकाश सिंह said...

बहुत अच्छा लगा पढ़कर और देखकर भी...ज्योत्स्ना mam की रचना पढ़कर और प्रीति mam की साज-सज्जा देखकर..........

M.L.S said...

very nice your poetry.aapne apne job aur poetry ka samanvay accha banaya hai , I am very happy.

M.L. said...

kavita ke bhav ke anusar usme jan dalna hi to bahut badi kala hai.I am very happy.

pankaj said...

kya kahu mai......aapki yeh kavita to dil ko chu gayee bas itna hi kahunga...........

kuch to baat hai aapke ish kavita me..........yaar agar ham yeh kahe ki aapke upar Mata saraswati ka saya hai to galat na hoga...

RADHEKRISHNA said...

its roccking...kharekhar mast chhe..

anita agarwal said...

tabiyat khush ho gayi ye rachna padh ker....badi apni si lagi..jab hum kisi se wakai jud jate hain magar pa nahi sakte to aisa mehsoos kerte hain.......jyotsna ji ki ye rachna bahut sunder hai aur usme tumhara design char chaand laga de raha hai.....

संत शर्मा said...

Nicly written & presented poem