"अन्तरंग" याने मेरे दिल का कोना,जो अब तक अ:जन्मा–अनकहा कही जी रहा था, मेरे एहसासों को शब्द मिले और इन् शब्दों से मुझे एक् पहचान मिली!
You have entered the world of InnerSoul …!
You’ll find positive, Motivational thoughts... In poetry few are written by Me n others too & Some r Translated also. I feel that thoughts heighten the awareness of our feelings & world around us.
God's Gift ...
यह पोस्टिंग पढने के लीये "design" पर क्लिक करें ...!
bahot sahi kaha hai...bas rishte sambhal lo...vo dur na ho vo hi dhyan rakho...kafi hai achchi jindgi bitane ke liye...aur usme dosti ka rishta khas...
aapki prtibha dekh kar mann ko bahut khushi hoti hai ... bahut hi accha likha hai..... andar se awaaz nikli..... dil ki awaaz... jo bahut prbhavshali hai... aapke lekhan ki tarhaan.....
It was really a very nice and a very realistic poem, and is based on the truth of life. Thanks for giving a chance to write about it. It was a really very good poem.
यह पोस्टिंग पढने के लीये "design" पर क्लिक करें ...!
20 comments:
VERY TRUE.........
WE SEE THIS IN OUR REAL LIFE
bahot sahi kaha hai...bas rishte sambhal lo...vo dur na ho vo hi dhyan rakho...kafi hai achchi jindgi bitane ke liye...aur usme dosti ka rishta khas...
nice one preeti ji,,its good to post things like it,, much appreciated,,
Ajit tripathi
nice presentation.....
God bless u !!
nice presentation.....
n its wording s good .....n true too....
keep it up :)
God bless u !!
wow.........so true n so touchy...
bilkul sahi feelings
IT IS A NICE POEM.
GOD BLESS YOU.
लिखने वाले कवि को बधाई।
इसे पढ़वाने के लिए शुक्रिया।
Har ek ke dwara kiya jane wala sach, Bahut sundar kavita.
Wonderful thought........
even if they are apart .... their presence enhances us .... its true nd u have penned it so very smoothly !
It's a nice poem with real life.Background is so nice
aapki prtibha dekh kar mann ko bahut khushi hoti hai ...
bahut hi accha likha hai.....
andar se awaaz nikli.....
dil ki awaaz...
jo bahut prbhavshali hai...
aapke lekhan ki tarhaan.....
It was really a very nice and a very realistic poem, and is based on the truth of life.
Thanks for giving a chance to write about it.
It was a really very good poem.
very nice thought.......there are certainly those relations...
and you have the depth to understand those relations.......nice one indeed.
It is a good poetry and true too. We ( the friends on orkut) may also feel the bonds with someone we get attracted to
have u written this one! too good.... again ur poetry stole my heart.
realy nice
well written
wah wah
rally nice.....
riste nibnane ki baat bahot aachi hai..
really its touchable...
Preeti
Wakai aapki lekhani bahut hi sundar likhti hai. Sabse accha to aapka chitro par likhna accha lagta hai
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